Six Sentence Sunday, September 16, 2012, #sixsunday

This week I’m sticking with an excerpt from my novella, Cookies for Santa.  In this scene Spinelli is getting a second chance with Shannon.     

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In one swift movement he spun in his chair and swept her onto his lap. Her green eyes widened but she didn’t resist. He leaned his head forward and brushed his lips lightly across hers. His heart leaped into his throat. He hadn’t fully expected the incalculable depth of intensity that swept through his veins the second her soft moist lips touched his. He needed a second.

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6 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday, September 16, 2012, #sixsunday”

  1. Pablo says:

    This was freshing like the air. Awesome six sentence story

  2. Silver James says:

    Oh, Valerie! I love that last sentence. “He needed a second.” That reveals so much about him. Plus, what leads up to that revelation is yummy. Well done this week!

  3. I love Spinelli more and more each week. 😉 Can’t wait for the book!

  4. Monica Enderle Pierce says:

    That’s sweet! I love his surprise. 😀

  5. Karen Michelle Nutt says:

    So sweet. He needed to indulge again. Love it!!

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